Revision Tips
My goal this year is to revise my novel, TESSA and CLAUDINE get it on the market. I finally have a working plan. As a Virgo, this makes me feel soooo much better.
Here’s the deal: I reread a chapter on the computer. What I’m doing is changing the tense from past to present and also tightening. As I read, I ask myself — does this scene move the story forward. If the answer is no, I delete it. Since I’ve decided to put the whole book in present tense, instead of past, I pay close attention to the verbs and make tense changes. And then I record the whole chapter on a tape recorder.
I got this idea after reading a newspaper article in which authors were interviewed about writing techiniques. If I hesitate while reading my words, it tells me that the sentence doesn’t flow well. I stop and make changes. I find that while reading, I often automatically change the sentence to something that sounds more natural. I catch spelling errors working this way and also find words that still the tense change. Overall, this system of revision has me pretty excited. Try it. You might like it.
Have you got any writing tips for me? Any new writing books you love? I saw a book advertised by James Alexander Thom, on Writing Historical Fiction that sounded good. No, he’s not a relative. We just happen to share the same last name.
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Stay warm. The winter weather is upon us. Lisbeth

This article was very useful for a paper I am writing for my thesis.
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Good. Glad that my article helped you out. Good luck with your thesis. Lisbeth